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也就10分左右吧,不会超过11分

All over the world, people appreciate friendship and different people have different opinions.
to be on 没必要
Second里面的or改成and是不是好点
英语不好个人愚见!

原文由 happyjyl 发表:
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Topic: What do you think a true friend should be like?


People all over the world appreciate friendship and different people have different opinions. As for me, a true friend must conform to the following requirements:

First, he dose not have to be on the same wave with me, but he must be sincere and worthy of my trust. True friends shall share their secrets, bitterness and happiness.

Second, he dose not have to be well educated, but there must be something in him that I can learn, such as politeness, passion, or gumption. True friends shall encourage each other and learn from each other.

Third, he dose not have to be always by my side, but must be available when I’m in trouble. A friend in need is a friend indeed.

Hard as it is, I’m always seeking for true friends.
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原文由 happyjyl 发表:
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to be on 没必要



什么意思?没看懂
he dose not have to be on the same wave with me, 应该是这一句
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i think i am just the friend  you want to find
i think i am just the friend  which you find
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我觉得这是篇典型的考试作文,很有八股文的味道。
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