主题：【求助】应助 请高手帮忙译成英文

原文由 ruojun 发表:
非常感谢您提出的建议，已经按照规则进行了修改。其中正文的页数没有将参考文献以及图像所包含的页数计入，由于该实验涉及的内容较多，页数有些超出规定的范围，不知是否一定需要删减？之前为保证图像大小一致性，对图像大小有调整，不知道文章中是否要保持图像的原始大小？这次所发文稿已经恢复图像原始大小。由于是第一次向贵刊投稿，对于该文稿还有什么修改意见，还要麻烦您多指教
Many thanks for your recommendations. I already made revisions based on relative roles. However, the page number in the text did not include those for cited references and pictures. The length of the paper may exceed the limit due to research contents involved, shall I shorten the length of the paper? We did some adjustments over the size of the pictures to achieve uniform picture size in the previous version. I am wondering if we shall keep the original size of the pictures in the paper. In this revision, all pictures are in the original size format. This is our first paper to your journal, please advise if there is anything else we should correct.

原文由 redanqi 发表:

原文由 ruojun 发表:
非常感谢您提出的建议，已经按照规则进行了修改。其中正文的页数没有将参考文献以及图像所包含的页数计入，由于该实验涉及的内容较多，页数有些超出规定的范围，不知是否一定需要删减？之前为保证图像大小一致性，对图像大小有调整，不知道文章中是否要保持图像的原始大小？这次所发文稿已经恢复图像原始大小。由于是第一次向贵刊投稿，对于该文稿还有什么修改意见，还要麻烦您多指教
Many thanks for your recommendations. I already made revisions based on relative roles. However, the page number in the text did not include those for cited references and pictures. The length of the paper may exceed the limit due to research contents involved, shall (should) I shorten the length of the paper? We did some adjustments over the size of the pictures to achieve uniform picture size in the previous version. I am wondering if we shall (should) keep the original size of the pictures in the paper. In this revision, all pictures are in the original size format. This is our first paper to your journal, please advise if there is anything else we should correct.

recommendation 感觉应改为advise,或者suggestion， proposal。 recommendation有推荐的意思

原文由 poorlittle 发表:

原文由 redanqi 发表:

原文由 ruojun 发表:
非常感谢您提出的建议，已经按照规则进行了修改。其中正文的页数没有将参考文献以及图像所包含的页数计入，由于该实验涉及的内容较多，页数有些超出规定的范围，不知是否一定需要删减？之前为保证图像大小一致性，对图像大小有调整，不知道文章中是否要保持图像的原始大小？这次所发文稿已经恢复图像原始大小。由于是第一次向贵刊投稿，对于该文稿还有什么修改意见，还要麻烦您多指教
Many thanks for your recommendations. I already made revisions based on relative roles. However, the page number in the text did not include those for cited references and pictures. The length of the paper may exceed the limit due to research contents involved, shall (should) I shorten the length of the paper? We did some adjustments over the size of the pictures to achieve uniform picture size in the previous version. I am wondering if we shall (should) keep the original size of the pictures in the paper. In this revision, all pictures are in the original size format. This is our first paper to your journal, please advise if there is anything else we should correct.

recommendation 感觉应改为advise,或者suggestion， proposal。 recommendation有推荐的意思

中译英是我的弱弱项, 译不来。 但别人译了我却又来挑剔, 请谅:

Advice (noun); advise (verb)

relative roles : relevant rules (guides)

the page number in the text did not...  :  the number of pages for the text does not...

alternatives for 图像 : graphics, graph, image, chart, diagram, photo 

I or we ?

due to research contents involved : due to large amount of experimental works involved

Shall I shorten the length of the paper?  :  is it necessary to cut it short?

In this revision, all pictures are in the original size format. : Nevertheless, all pictures have been reverted to its original size in this revision

This is our first paper to your journal, please advise if there is anything else we should correct. : As this is our first paper submitted to your journal, please advise if there is anything else we should rectify (improve)