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Any spot in the chromatogram obtained with the test solution, apart from the principal spot and any spot corresponding to impurity A is not more intense than the spot in the chromatogram obtained with reference solution (b) (0.5 per cent) and not more than two such spots are more intense than the spot in the chromatogram obtained with reference solution (c) (0.2 per cent).

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背景:这是美国药典上测定某药物中有关物质的一段文字。上下文:
Apply to the plate 10 µl of each solution. Develop over a path of 10 cm using a freshly prepared mixture of 2.5 volumes of concentrated ammonia R, 32.5 volumes of acetone R, 24.5 volunes of ethanol R, 10.5 volumes of water R and 35 volumes of toluene R, prepared in the order given. Dry the plate in a current of air. Spray with potassium iodobismuthate solution R and dry for 15 min in a current of air. Spray with dilute hydrogen peroxide solution R. Any spot corresponding to impurity A in the chromatogram obtained with the test solution is not more intense than the corresponding spot in the chromatogram obtained with reference solution (a) (0.5 per cent). Any spot in the chromatogram obtained with the test solution, apart from the principal spot and any spot corresponding to impurity A is not more intense than the spot in the chromatogram obtained with reference solution (b) (0.5 per cent) and not more than two such spots are more intense than the spot in the chromatogram obtained with reference solution (c) (0.2 per cent). The test is not valid unless the chromatogram obtained with reference soutlion (a) shows two such clearly separated spots and the spot in the chromatogram obtained with reference solution (d) is clearly visible.

答案揭晓:见Tina的回帖。
Tina的翻译是最正确且最通顺的,奖20分。
orionwei第一个回帖,且意思基本正确,奖10分。
rogerhuang009非常积极,奖10分。
推荐答案:Tina回复于2007/11/10
Any spot in the chromatogram obtained with the test solution, apart from the principal spot and any spot corresponding to impurity A is not more intense than the spot in the chromatogram obtained with reference solution (b) (0.5 per cent) and not more than two such spots are more intense than the spot in the chromatogram obtained with reference solution (c) (0.2 per cent).

很久没来了,又赶上活动了,版主真好.我来碰碰运气吧!
这个特别像我前一阵写的BHA的东西,很显然是用薄层色谱来测定有关物质的.我的翻译如下:

在供试品溶液所显斑点中,除主斑点及与杂质A对应斑点外的任何斑点,均不得深于对照品溶液b中所显示斑点(0.5%),且深于对照品溶液c中所显示斑点(0.2%)的斑点数不得超过2个。
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orionwei回复于2007/11/07

供试品溶液所得色谱图中,除主斑点及与杂质A相对应的斑点外,不得有任何斑点的颜色深于对照溶液(b)(0.5%)的主斑点,不得有任何两个斑点的颜色深于对照溶液(c)(0.2%)的主斑点。
不知翻译的对不对,请楼主指正。

版主点评:not more than是“不超过”的意思,所以最后一句的意思应该是:颜色深于对照溶液(c)(0.2%)斑点的斑点数不得超过两个。另外对照溶液(b)和(c)中并没有提到“main spot”,而是“spot”(实际上对照溶液b和c都只是用一个杂质对照品点样的),还是翻译成“斑点”精确些。你是第一个回帖的,理应给10分。

rogerhuang009回复于2007/11/09

如下为本人整段落的翻译,请版主明示:

将每种溶液在板上各点样10 µl,将板放在按如下顺序新配制的混合液中展开10cm,即用2.5份的浓氨溶液,32.5份的丙酮,24.5份的乙醇,10.5份的水及35份的甲苯进行配制。将板置于空气流中干燥,用碘化铋钾溶液喷雾显色:供试液所得色谱图中对应于杂质A的任何斑点的颜色,不得深于对照液(a)中相对应的斑点颜色(0.5%);除主斑点及对应于杂质A的任何斑点外,供试液所得色谱图中的任何斑点的颜色,不得深于对照液(b)所得色谱图中的斑点颜色(0.5%);并且(在供试液所得色谱图中)不得有二个以上的斑点的颜色,较对照液(c)所得色谱图中的斑点颜色更深(0.2%)。仅当对照液(a)所得色谱图中显示有二个清晰而分开的斑点,同时在对照液(d)所得色谱图中的斑点颜色清晰可见时,本测试才有效。

版主点评:意思都是对的,要是再斟酌一下字句就更好了。

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供试品溶液所得色谱图中,除主斑点及与杂质A相对应的斑点外,不得有任何斑点的颜色深于对照溶液(b)(0.5%)的主斑点,不得有任何两个斑点的颜色深于对照溶液(c)(0.2%)的主斑点。
不知翻译的对不对,请楼主指正。

版主点评:not more than是“不超过”的意思,所以最后一句的意思应该是:颜色深于对照溶液(c)(0.2%)斑点的斑点数不得超过两个。另外对照溶液(b)和(c)中并没有提到“main spot”,而是“spot”(实际上对照溶液b和c都只是用一个杂质对照品点样的),还是翻译成“斑点”精确些。你是第一个回帖的,理应给10分。
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Any spot in the chromatogram obtained with the test solution, apart from the principal spot and any spot corresponding to impurity A is not more intense than the spot in the chromatogram obtained with reference solution (b) (0.5 per cent) and not more than two such spots are more intense than the spot in the chromatogram obtained with reference solution (c) (0.2 per cent).
除主斑点和杂质A对应的斑点外,测试液形成的色谱中的任何斑点,不应比参比液(b)(0.5%)形成的色谱中的任何斑点大(深、致密???),不超过两个斑点比参比液(c)(0.2%)形成的色谱中的斑点大(深、致密)。

关键是intense如何翻译,需要专业知识?见笑了Happy.
补充一下,刚才把not more than two such spots给丢了。

楼主点评:这里的intense是指“颜色深于”。
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原文由 dragondes 发表:
Any spot in the chromatogram obtained with the test solution, apart from the principal spot and any spot corresponding to impurity A is not more intense than the spot in the chromatogram obtained with reference solution (b) (0.5 per cent) and not more than two such spots are more intense than the spot in the chromatogram obtained with reference solution (c) (0.2 per cent).
试样溶液所得色谱图中,除主斑点和杂质A对应的所有斑点外,任何斑点的颜色不得深于对照溶液(b)(0.5%)所得色谱图中主斑点,颜色深于对照溶液(c)(0.2%)所得色谱图中主斑点的斑点数不得超过两个。


忘了一个词,为:
试样溶液所得色谱图中,除主斑点和杂质A对应的所有斑点外,任何斑点的颜色不得深于对照溶液(b)(0.5%)所得色谱图中主斑点,且颜色深于对照溶液(c)(0.2%)所得色谱图中主斑点的斑点数不得超过两个。

版主点评:“除主斑点和杂质A对应的所有斑点外”改成“除主斑点和杂质A所对应的斑点外”更好些。另外注意一下对照溶液b和c中“主斑点”的提法,原文并没有说是main spot。
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如下为本人整段落的翻译,请版主明示:

将每种溶液在板上各点样10 µl,将板放在按如下顺序新配制的混合液中展开10cm,即用2.5份的浓氨溶液,32.5份的丙酮,24.5份的乙醇,10.5份的水及35份的甲苯进行配制。将板置于空气流中干燥,用碘化铋钾溶液喷雾显色:供试液所得色谱图中对应于杂质A的任何斑点的颜色,不得深于对照液(a)中相对应的斑点颜色(0.5%);除主斑点及对应于杂质A的任何斑点外,供试液所得色谱图中的任何斑点的颜色,不得深于对照液(b)所得色谱图中的斑点颜色(0.5%);并且(在供试液所得色谱图中)不得有二个以上的斑点的颜色,较对照液(c)所得色谱图中的斑点颜色更深(0.2%)。仅当对照液(a)所得色谱图中显示有二个清晰而分开的斑点,同时在对照液(d)所得色谱图中的斑点颜色清晰可见时,本测试才有效。

版主点评:意思都是对的,要是再斟酌一下字句就更好了。
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Any spot in the chromatogram obtained with the test solution, apart from the principal spot and any spot corresponding to impurity A is not more intense than the spot in the chromatogram obtained with reference solution (b) (0.5 per cent) and not more than two such spots are more intense than the spot in the chromatogram obtained with reference solution (c) (0.2 per cent).

很久没来了,又赶上活动了,版主真好.我来碰碰运气吧!
这个特别像我前一阵写的BHA的东西,很显然是用薄层色谱来测定有关物质的.我的翻译如下:

在供试品溶液所显斑点中,除主斑点及与杂质A对应斑点外的任何斑点,均不得深于对照品溶液b中所显示斑点(0.5%),且深于对照品溶液c中所显示斑点(0.2%)的斑点数不得超过2个。
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除去系统噪点和由杂质产生的噪点, 从测试溶液中得到的噪点通常不会比参照溶液中噪点的相对丰度大,即使大,这样的噪点不会超过两个。

版主点评:经常看美国药典的人就会知道,这段文字描写的方法是TLC。这里的intense是指“颜色深于”。而且这是美国药典上的文字,药典上经常用陈述句来表示“应当”的意思。
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测试液所得色谱图中,除主斑点及对应杂质A的斑点外,任何斑点应不得比参照液B图谱中的斑点深(0.5%),不得有超过两个这样的斑点比参照液C图谱中的斑点深。(0.2%)
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由于happy提供的上下文有限,虽然能确定是薄层色谱的应用,但还不能确定该文是应用紫外扫描定性或定量,还是根据斑点颜色来判断。
但根据intense一词,是指光或信号强,本人认为是紫外或荧光等定量的。不当之处请指正呀!

Any spot in the chromatogram obtained with the test solution, apart from the principal spot and any spot corresponding to impurity A is not more intense than the spot in the chromatogram obtained with reference solution (b) (0.5 per cent) and not more than two such spots are more intense than the spot in the chromatogram obtained with reference solution (c) (0.2 per cent).

除原点和对应于杂质A的斑点外,待测液的(薄层)谱图中其他斑点的(光)强度不能超过标准溶液(b)(0.5%)的谱图中相对应的斑点;并且(在待测液的谱图中)不能有超过两个以上斑点的强度比标准溶液(c)(0.2%)谱图中的(斑点的强度)高。

版主点评:其实药典里描述TLC图谱时经常用intense来表示斑点的颜色深于其它斑点,看看中国药典中英文版就知道了。
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