主题：【讨论】悬赏翻译一个英文标准

原文由 cuggi_liang 发表:
我也想翻译挣点积分花花,但是看了半天不知道到哪里找原文!

在零楼最下面那个带曲别针的蓝色的字，ASTM的，点击，打开。

欢迎参与翻译。

原文由 redanqi 发表:

9.4.2 If a standard or specification for use between two or three parties requires a defined property level after a specific time or radiant exposure in an exposure test conducted according to this practice, base the specified property level on at least two independent experiments run in each laboratory to determine the reproducibility for the exposure and property measurement process. The reproducibility of the exposure/property measurement process is then used to determine the maximum or minimum level of property after the exposure that is mutually agreeable to all parties.

在依据此规程作曝露测试时，如果一个用于两方或者三方的标准或者规格要求一个在一个特定时间或者发光曝露之后明确的属性级，基于此在至少两个独立的实验所测定的特定的属性级，来测定此曝露和属性测量程序的再现性。然后此曝露和属性测量程序的再现性就可以用于测定相关各方同意的曝露以后属性的最高或者最低级别

specification的意思有:指明;详细说明;具体要求;说明书;规格;规范.从上下文来说这里的specification是"规范"的意思,并且只能翻译成"规范",不能翻译成"标准".标准(standard)和规范(specifications)的区别在于:标准是统一的技术要求,是一种法规,具有权威性、标准性和严肃性;规范是标准在某一范围内的具体化，或者是某些部门或团体把约定俗成的技术要求整理出来后在一定范围内实施的规定,具有指导性、规范性和导向性。当规范趋于成熟的时候就可以上升成为标准.

after a specific time or radiant exposure in an exposure test conducted according to this practice:根据本规程进行暴露试验,给予指定的暴露时间或辐射曝露量后

base the specified property level on at least two independent experiments run in each laboratory
这里的句子结构是base A on B(把specified property level建立在至少两个独立实验室所做实验的基础上),意译就是:由两个或两个以上独立的实验室测定(两方或三方)指定的property level.所以base不是"基于此"的意思.这里的specified是指由上文提到的two or three parties 所指定的property level

原文由 redanqi 发表:

原文由 happyjyl 发表:

原文由 laozou 发表:
有没有人翻译好第九部分“试验周期和结果的评价”啊？比较急需这一部分

晚上回去帮你看看.

第九部分比较长，要不要一人一半

晕，我刚才刚注册，2小时还不能发贴。10部分好了，如下，部分专业词组难免不准确，请给予指导：
10. Report
10.1 Report the following information:
10.1.1 Type and model of exposure device.
10.1.2 Type of light source.
10.1.3 Average distance from specimens to light source.
10.1.4 Age of lamps at the beginning of the exposure, and
whether any of the lamps were replaced during the period of
exposure.
10.1.5 Type of black panel (uninsulated or insulated) used.
10.1.6 If required, report irradiance measured at a single
wavelength in W/(m2·nm) and radiant energy for a single

wavelength in J/(m2·nm). Report irradiance measured in a
broad band, such as 300-400 nm, in W/m2 with the spectral
region specified. Report radiant energy measured in a broad
band as J/m2 with the spectral region specified.
10.1.6.1 Do not report irradiance or radiant exposure unless
direct measurement of irradiance was made during the exposure.
10.1.7 Elapsed exposure time.
10.1.7.1 When required, report any test interruptions greater
than 24 h in accordance with 7.10.
10.1.8 Light and dark-water-condensation cycle employed.
10.1.9 Operating black panel temperature.
10.1.10 Operating relative humidity during light exposure
(if measured).
10.1.11 Specimen repositioning procedure (if different from
that described in 8.4).
10.1.12 Results of property tests. Where retention of

characteristic
property is reported, calculate results according to
Practice D 5870.

10 报告
10.1 报告需包括以下信息:
10.1.1 试验装置的类型和型号,
10.1.2 光源的类型,
10.1.3 样品与光源间的平均距离,
10.1.4 试验开始时灯管(泡)的使用时间,以及在试验期间是否更换新灯管(泡).
10.1.5 使用的黑色面板的类型(隔热或是不隔热).
10.1.6 如果有要求,报告测定的某一波长的相对光谱功率[W/(m2·nm)]和某一波长的光辐射能[J/(m2·nm)].此值需由在较宽的波长范围,如300~400 nm,光谱区测定的辐射照度(W/m2)计算.辐射能是由在较宽的波长范围测定的光谱区辐照量[J/m2]计算.
10.1.6.1 除非在试验中对光谱进行了直接测定,否则不应报告光谱功率或辐射能.
10.1.7 试验耗时,
10.1.7.1 如有要求,参照7.10所述,报告应说明中断时长超过24 h的试验的情况,
10.1.8 光/暗水浓缩周期
10.1.9 操作黑色面板的温度.
10.1.10 光试验(如测定)操作期间的相对湿度.
10.1.11 说明样品重新配置的程序(如果与8.4所述不同).
10.1.12 属性测试结果.在持久力属性报告处,需按D5870计算结果.

晕，我刚才刚注册，2小时还不能发贴。10部分好了，如下，部分专业词组难免不准确，请给予指导：
翻译的很棒，有时间吧其它没有人翻译也都翻译了吧

我有空时再试试。请一定多指教疏误之处。

yzs 945是第一个参与翻译的网友,真的很棒! 希望大家多向他学习,积极踊跃一些.下面这些问题与你商榷:

原文由 yzs945 发表:
10.1.6 If required, report irradiance measured at a single wavelength in W/(m2·nm) and radiant energy for a single
wavelength in J/(m2·nm). Report irradiance measured in a
broad band, such as 300-400 nm, in W/m2 with the spectral
region specified. Report radiant energy measured in a broad
band as J/m2 with the spectral region specified.
10.1.6 如果有要求,报告测定的某一波长的相对光谱功率[W/(m2·nm)]和某一波长的光辐射能[J/(m2·nm)].此值需由在较宽的波长范围,如300~400 nm,光谱区测定的辐射照度(W/m2)计算.辐射能是由在较宽的波长范围测定的光谱区辐照量[J/m2]计算.

irradiance为什么要翻译成相对光谱功率呢?涂料专业的术语是”辐射照度”.我看你在第三句里也翻译成”辐射照度”,专业英语翻译应该前后一致,否则容易让人混淆.
“此值需由在较宽的波长范围……”--从你的翻译来看,第一句中提到的在某一波长测得的irradiance和radiant energy应该是落在第二句和第三句提到的broad band之内的,而我认为不是这样的.第一句的意思是说在单一波长处测定辐射照度,以W/(m2•nm)为单位表示,在单一波长处测定辐射能,以J/(m2•nm)为单位表示.第三句的意思是在指定的波长范围内(如300-400nm)测定辐射照度,以W/m2为单位表示.这里的specified意思是具体指明的,spectral region是光谱范围.第四句的意思是在指定的波长范围内测定辐射能,以[J/m2]为单位表示.

原文由 yzs945 发表:
10.1.7 Elapsed exposure time.
10.1.7 试验耗时

从10.1.7.1提到的内容来看,elpased在这里指的是由于计划外出现的情况而导致实验中断的时间

原文由 yzs945 发表:
10.1.8 Light and dark-water-condensation cycle employed.
10.1.8 光/暗水浓缩周期

dark-water-condensation不知道专业的表达方式是什么,得向diamond请教.10.1.11中出现的Specimen repositioning也不知道是什么,得问diamond

原文由 yzs945 发表:
Where retention of characteristic property is reported, calculate results according to Practice D 5870.
在持久力属性报告处,需按D5870计算结果.

我是这样理解的:这里的retention是指某些characteristic property(特征属性)会保持不变,在报告时应按规程D5870计算结果.

由于专业限制,以上内容还有待涂料专业人士来批评指正.

都翻译完全了吗?我现在才看到.

原文由 skysnow520 发表:
都翻译完全了吗?我现在才看到.

欢迎参与！已翻译部分：
7.1-7.4.1
8.1-8.5
9.1-Note11
10-10.1.12

对yzs945译文部分不同的理解
10.1.5 Type of black panel (uninsulated or insulated) used.
10.1.5 使用的黑板的类型(绝缘或非绝缘).
[注：]黑板或白板是试验用的标准板，其对光辐照的反应不同。
10.1.6 If required, report irradiance measured at a single
wavelength in W/(m2•nm) and radiant energy for a single
wavelength in J/(m2•nm). Report irradiance measured in a
broad band, such as 300-400 nm, in W/m2 with the spectral
region specified. Report radiant energy measured in a broad
band as J/m2 with the spectral region specified.
10.1.6 如果有要求,报告在单波长时测得的辐照度[W/(m2•nm)]以及单波长的辐射能[J/(m2•nm)]。报告在宽波段,如300~400 nm内测定指定光谱区的辐照度值(W/m2)。报告在宽波段内测定的指定光谱区的辐照量[J/m2]。
10.1.6.1 Do not report irradiance or radiant exposure unless
direct measurement of irradiance was made during the exposure.
10.1.6.1 除非在曝晒过程中对辐照度进行了直接测定,否则不要报告辐照度或辐射能.
10.1.8 Light and dark-water-condensation cycle employed
10.1.8 采用光照及暗室（非光照）－水－冷凝循环方式
10.1.9 Operating black panel temperature.
10.1.9 黑板的控制温度
10.1.10 Operating relative humidity during light exposure
(if measured).
10.1.10 在光照期间控制的相对湿度（如果有测量）。
10.1.11 Specimen repositioning procedure (if different from that described in 8.4).
10.1.11 样件复位程序（是否不同于8.4所描述的）
[注：]因为在试验过程中，样件可能被取出来观看。
10.1.12 Results of property tests. Where retention of characteristic property is reported, calculate results according to Practice D 5870
10.1.12 性能测试结果.报告样件的特性保持,根据D5870来计算结果

我来译一下标准的前半部分。

1. Scope应用范围
1.1 This practice covers the selection of test conditions for accelerated exposure testing of coatings and related products in fluorescent UV and condensation devices conducted according to Practices G 151 and G 154. This practice also covers the preparation of test specimens, and the evaluation of test results.
本标准包括根据标准G 151和G 154，在紫外荧光及冷凝设备中，对涂料及相关产品加速老化（曝晒）试验条件的选择。本标准还包括试验样品的制备及试验结果的评价。
Table 1 describes commonly used test conditions.
表1 描述的是通常采用的试验条件
NOTE 1—Previous versions of this practice referenced fluorescent UV devices described by Practice G 53, which described very specific equipment designs. Practice G 53 has been withdrawn and replaced by Practice G 151, which describes performance criteria for all exposure devices that use laboratory light sources, and by Practice G 154, which gives requirements for exposing nonmetallic materials in fluorescent UV devices.
注1——由标准G 53规定的先前版本标准说明的紫外荧光设备，采用非常特殊的设计。现在撤销标准G 53而用标准G 151和G 154来代替，标准G 151说明了所有采用实验室光源的老化设备的性能标准，而标准G 154则要求所有紫外荧光设备中都必须采用非金属材料。
NOTE 2—ISO 11507:1997 also describes fluorescent UV-condensation
exposures of paints and coatings.
注2——ISO 11507：1997也说明了油漆和涂料的紫外荧光-冷凝老化。
1.2 The values stated in SI units are to be regarded as the standard. The values given in parentheses are for information only.
1.2 数据以SI单位为标准。括号中的数据只是一些资料。
1.3 This standard does not purport to address all of the safety problems associated with its use. It is the responsibility of the user of this standard to establish appropriate safety and health practices and determine the applicability of regulatory limitations prior to use.
本标准无意陈述使用本标准所涉及的所有安全问题。使用者有责任在使用本标准前建立适当的安全卫生标准并决定规章适用的限制范围。