主题：【求助】英文摘要需要修改一下

原文由 poorlittle(poorlittle) 发表:
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The sample was extracted with ethyl acetate and purified with silica.
 
detected by GC-NPD, qualitative two-pillar and amount of external standard. – Where is the verb?
detected。 这句少主语。本身是想用前句的主语，但是他用了句号。如果改为逗号，then detected by。。。就差不多了。
 
In the range of 0.002～0.03mg/kg , the recovery (n=6) is 82.3～100.1% ，with RSD of 1.7～5.1%.
 
The limit of determination is 0.006mg/kg for triadimenol and 0.002mg/kg for the rest of the 6 pesticides

原文由 水番(psq0513) 发表:
大家好,我写的论文,审稿老师让我把英文摘要需要修改一下,我做了一下修改,我怕写的不好,请大家再帮我修改一下,谢谢了!

"摘要：建立了应用配有NPD检测器的气相色谱仪检测蔬菜中涕灭威、异丙威、嘧霉胺、莠去津、三唑醇、噻嗪酮、抑霉唑残留量的方法。样品采用乙酸乙酯提取，硅胶柱净化，旋蒸定容后上机检测。以GC-NPD测定，外标法定量。7种农药添加浓度在0.002～0.03mg/kg时，回收率在82.3%～100.1%之间，相对标准偏差在1.7%～5.1%之间。检测限分别为：三唑醇0.006mg/kg，其它6种为0.002mg/kg。"

"Abstract：The method of determining aldicarb，isoprocarb，pyrimethanil，atrazine,triadimenol，buprofezin，Imazalil in vegetable was established．The sample was extracted with ethyl acetate and in the purifying process Silica was used . detected by GC-NPD, qualitative two-pillar and amount of external standard. In the range of 0.002～0.03mg/kg , recoveries (n=6) were 82.3～100.1% ，with RSD of 1.7～5.1%.The limits of determination were respectively: triadimenol are 0.006mg/kg, any other 6 pesticides are 0.002mg/kg ."

原文由 水番(psq0513) 发表:

"Abstract：The method of determining aldicarb，isoprocarb，pyrimethanil，atrazine,triadimenol，buprofezin，Imazalil in vegetable was established．The sample was extracted with ethyl acetate and in the purifying process Silica was used . detected by GC-NPD, qualitative two-pillar and amount of external standard. In the range of 0.002～0.03mg/kg , recoveries (n=6) were 82.3～100.1% ，with RSD of 1.7～5.1%.The limits of determination were respectively: triadimenol are 0.006mg/kg, any other 6 pesticides are 0.002mg/kg ."